filled me with joy
it made her features
glow
she radiated happiness.
You have a great smile
I said.
At first she looked
surprised
like she wasn't used to
getting compliments
and then she grinned
she looked like she
was the happiest person
ever to walk the earth.
- SilverGoose's blog
- Sprout
- Log in or register to post comments
angelaweasley
Jan 04, 2017
Aw, this is so cute. This makes me really happy because I am so constantly in a sea of depressing poetry. Don't get me wrong, I love a good sad poem, but it's so nice to see a little happy one. I love the structure here, it feels very clear and sweet.
-aw