I like it a lot!! the line breaks are rly good and the verbage is well thought out. the use of dashes and ellipses could be fine-tuned a bit more - the dash after "only four more years" feels a bit too quick. other than that it's a super emotional and well written poem, nice job!
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I like it a lot!! the line breaks are rly good and the verbage is well thought out. the use of dashes and ellipses could be fine-tuned a bit more - the dash after "only four more years" feels a bit too quick. other than that it's a super emotional and well written poem, nice job!
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