The solar eclipse,
On a day where cold nips
The sun half covered
By the moon which hovered
In front of the sun
The eclipse, has now begun.
Crickets chirp,
Owls get to work.
Sky go’s black,
In totality for only a little, before the moon heads back.
The solar eclipse, done like a flash,
Is all gone, and home you dash
Comments
I'm happy to see more pieces about the eclipse, I didn't think I would! I absolutely love those little details about the owls and crickets, the night creatures mistakenly coming out of hiding to do their night things. Moreover, this piece just has such a good rhythm to it!
thanks!
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