Tiny Writes
I wrote this about my chronic illness but I feel it should be longer so yea I'm trying to think of ideas but I have none.
I feel death on my door
Each day when I wake,
I’m afraid
And I lay
In my warm soft bed,
While my nerves explode my legs
And you still refuse to say
“ I get it, you're in pain."
Comments
You could make descriptions of the pain longer, What you feel after the quotation, I don't got more but this is real good so far!!
Thank you so much!!
of course
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