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This sounds VERY interesting...but why is the black cat called Marmalade? This seems like a name for an orange cat to be honest. 

Other things to think about:

what are the names of the different peoples (if that's what you're doing)

why do they hate each other?

WHy is this dangerous?

What is Em's goal?

Tiny Write by OverTheRainbow, June 19 2024 1 year ago

Thank you so much! I will!

Sadie 1 year ago

Thanks!

Watching 1 year ago

this is what I came to:

I am gonna make him die by drowning while skating on an ice rink, WITH THE BABY and the baby lives but he doesn't :-) so dramatic. 

Tiny Write by LongBilledCurlew, May 30 2024 1 year ago

yeah :( I am bi and also Jewish so if this happens I am seriously considering moving to Canada. I know it is wrong to want someone to die, but is it okay if he has caused so much harm to people? 

(have you seen his thing about trans rights that he wants to do if he gets reelected, cuz he said he will only allow 2 genders and they will be assingned at birth. Help. I have a buncha friends who are trans and I would never wish this even on my worst enemy). and then theres the climate crisis, and all these wars D: and he's AHEAD in the polls right now. I am seriously dreading the future of millions of people right now. 

sorry if this was dark......

Tiny Write by LongBilledCurlew, June 21 2024 1 year ago

Thank you I definitely will!

Tiny Write by OverTheRainbow, June 19 2024 1 year ago

I've started song lyrics as poems or stanza's and than challenge myself to add melodies to them and build them out from there. A lot of writing music lyrics may just be experimenting, seeing what works and writing from your heart!

Tiny Write by Omi Homie, June 1 2024 1 year ago

 First one seems it would tackle a more rival/enemies to lovers trope with a slow burn, and second one seems more scandal/lies oriented. I'm a personal fan of the second choice because of the drama

Tiny Write by AJ_Dees, June 11 2024 1 year ago

Sounds awesome! I'd start by writing out scenes you see in your head about any part of this story, (is there a battle you want to have happen, a cool creature she meets) and fleshing out Em's character and the rest of the characters! Creating character's is my favorite part of writing a story and as you create their strengths and flaws a might get inspiration for a plot/goal/main dilemma might catch your eye for why they need to save the world, and how they will do it. I'd definitely read your bookm, it sounds really interesting already!

Tiny Write by OverTheRainbow, June 19 2024 1 year ago

Now I wanna read the book series. Lovely poem!

Come Back 1 year ago