Edward and Bella from the Twilight Saga. They are perfect for each other. Bella is very selfless and brave, and Edward is loyal, protective, and unique. Here comes the new Romeo and Juliet!
Ahh, this has always been one of my very favorite methods of shaking myself out of writer's block: writing about writer's block itself! Clearly you've broken through whatever barrier was in your way because you've wound up with a wonderful piece, and your sense of humor really shines through!
"You are at peace." Peaceful it is. This poem so well highlights winter's quiet beauty, something easy to lose sight of when the gray days seem neverending... Lovely read.
Edward and Bella from the Twilight Saga. They are perfect for each other. Bella is very selfless and brave, and Edward is loyal, protective, and unique. Here comes the new Romeo and Juliet!
Thank you!
Thank you! I intended to post this in response to the challenge "Climbing" is there any way I could do that without reposting this?
The real spirit of the countryside. I can almost smell the fresh air.
Ahh, this has always been one of my very favorite methods of shaking myself out of writer's block: writing about writer's block itself! Clearly you've broken through whatever barrier was in your way because you've wound up with a wonderful piece, and your sense of humor really shines through!
"You are at peace." Peaceful it is. This poem so well highlights winter's quiet beauty, something easy to lose sight of when the gray days seem neverending... Lovely read.
Thank you!
Wow! This poem intrigues me--who/what is it about? I love and the imagery of the jar and your use of questions to create a desperate tone.
What a beautifully fraught scene! I love your use of sensory detail and repetition (misstep/misfortune).
I love how you captured the feeling of being a friend in the "now" but also in the "always."