you are a dancer and so you find a way to dance
through everything:
the hallways, gym class, chorus
when we have to stand, white fields, your dance studio,
the rain, the snow, the world,
all the time instructing me on how to do it –
how to point my toes and smile and dance, you say,
now dance. and i, with my awkward poise
and stiff martial artist stance, laugh and step to the side:
show me how. and off you go,
in pointe shoes and a white tulle skirt
or at least that’s how i imagine you, a snowflake ballerina
like the ones twirling outside the window
the very first time it snowed.
Comments
This is so pretty!
I know this is really random, and you can totally say no, but I was wondering if you would maybe want to read a book I wrote in verse. I really love your writing, and I think it would be cool if you could give me some feedback on it. I understand that this is kind of a big ask, and you don't need to read the whole thing if you choose to read any at all. I will understand whatever response you give.
I really love your poetry, so please never cease to write.
Sincerely,
Maelyn
P.S. I would have written this in a message, but as the feature is disabled, I figured this was the best I could do.
omggggggggg yes i would love to!!!!!!!! i'm so honored that first of all you want me to do this and second that you're always so kind and supportive in your comments on my stuff, it makes my day every time!! if you want to share the link to the story or however you want me to read it i'm so up for this! <333 -sela
Thank you so much!!!!! I can either share the link with you or you can give me your email and I can share it with you, whichever you are more comfortable with :)
i think i'd rather you share the link if you're ok with that - just since we're on an open comment instead of messages haha
i'm so excited & again so grateful you thought of me for this!!
Sounds good! Thank you so, so much for doing this, I'm so excited as well! Here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q9s0_tpw2XCqiLSUyoQq5yhvA9iZ4aCzX1C8wYGkowQ/edit?usp=sharing
Just a heads up, I'm only partially through editing, and I started it a couple years ago so the style changes quite a bit over the course of the story
totally fine :)
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