this is the most recent draft of the pilot script to the series i've been working on. it's been through a lot of evolutions, i posted a show bible a while back (find that here for background information).
We wait like teenagers for our owners’ car to leave the driveway. All day has been spent reading the notes back in my head, turning the humans’ nonsense words into lyrics of my song, catching their absent-minded humming in my cracks.
The restaurant was small and crowded With people waiting an hour to get their burgers and fries. All the outside tables were full, because it was a nice day for a February afternoon.
She was beautiful in all of the usual ways. She had wide eyes that reflected the depths of the ocean and the heights of the sky, so when others gazed upon them they thought that they could fly.
She was beautiful, but in a different sort of way. She had long, flaming red hair Always tangled Always down She wore polka dots and stripes At the same time Didn't care Didn't care
“Help! I screamed, running as fast as I could into the forest. My breath was coming in short pants as I sobbed out cries for help. “Please, someone, help me!”