as I stumble out of the truck, I look up
and I start thinking
and I just can’t stop
as I gaze into the Milky Way
I can’t help but notice
the overwhelmingness of it all
I try to get others to see it,
the beautiful,
terrifying,
incomprehensible
grandness of it all,
but they can never see
the weight of it
pressing down,
with the weight of a thousand suns
onto me
if only they could take the time
to just look up
they’d see what I see
and then they’d start thinking too
Posted in response to the challenge Stars.
Comments
I had to read this a few times and I found a new thing to love about it each time. "Incomprehensible grandness of it all" and "the weight of a thousand suns" are both very compelling lines. Keep writing!
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