It's later than I thought, half past 11.
- YouTube
- K-pop
- Reactions
It's later than I thought, half past 12.
- Does he love me?
- Should I change?
- Why do I do this to myself?
It's later than I thought, half past 2.
- Eyes heavy
- Mind full
- Body sore
It's earlier than I thought, half past 5.
- Alarm loud
- Light streaming in
- Quiet footsteps
It's earlier than I thought, half past 7.
- On the bus
- Almost too late
- Eyes bleary
It's earlier than I thought, half past 9.
- Struggle with math
- Hot tea in hand
- Music loud
It's over already,
tomorrow will be the same,
I can never keep up with the days,
that all seem the same.
Posted in response to the challenge PAST CONTESTS: Spring '24: Writing Contest.
Comments
Oo, I really love to see this kind of experimentation with form! Both the repetition and the list-making drive home the lines of your last stanza about the monotony of your days, all blurring together.
Thank you!
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