Thank you! I wanted this poem to show how something as simple (and something that’s sometimes disliked) is beautiful, and I thought the last line showed that! :)
oh my. this is so so so beautiful!! i love the parentheticals, and the correlation that's pointed out between love and fear. so much depth, and there's a succinctness to this that makes it that much more poignant.
This is absolutely amazing! It brings up so much pain but also beauty, this is a delicious meal, 7 course dinner to read. Beautiful beautiful job <3
Dang I'm sorry. that sounds very unfun. Do you have any other ways to avoid people?
OMG! Where in SF was the first one taken?! (Also they're all so so pretty! The colors :)
I like it! But also I'm allergic to pineapple lolll
I always bring a book because of that exact problem. Because I am 17 though, my parents don't let me anymore.
This hurts to read, in a good way.
Thank you! I wanted this poem to show how something as simple (and something that’s sometimes disliked) is beautiful, and I thought the last line showed that! :)
oh my. this is so so so beautiful!! i love the parentheticals, and the correlation that's pointed out between love and fear. so much depth, and there's a succinctness to this that makes it that much more poignant.
Ahhh this is so good. So well composed. Every line feels like it has a place!
I love that ending lie so much! "There are many great stories,
even in very simple lines."