Hiii! I know this is kinda late, but thank you so much for your advice! I've actually tried writing some poems like that and shared it with my family, and they said it really portrays me in it! And I love your advice about the mystery part! :)
I really appreciate this piece. I have felt this way many times. I was actually crying about this exact thing this morning. But my mom said this to me and now I want to say it to you. I want you to know that you do have another choice. You can say no to more things. You will be able to do the things you do choose well and pay more attention to them, and you will be happier. You might not have as much on your college applications, but what you do have will be very meaningful. Sometimes less is more.
This is so real - perfectly captures how I feel too!! Beautiful work. Thank you for this - I see you. :)
I want to be a pilot, and then later work for the NGA. I also want to find a way to minimize plastic pollution that people will actually heed.
Hiii! I know this is kinda late, but thank you so much for your advice! I've actually tried writing some poems like that and shared it with my family, and they said it really portrays me in it! And I love your advice about the mystery part! :)
I really appreciate this piece. I have felt this way many times. I was actually crying about this exact thing this morning. But my mom said this to me and now I want to say it to you. I want you to know that you do have another choice. You can say no to more things. You will be able to do the things you do choose well and pay more attention to them, and you will be happier. You might not have as much on your college applications, but what you do have will be very meaningful. Sometimes less is more.
Wow I love this!!! I can really feel Inel’s emotions! This is so well written!
I love this hanningy! Super clever and funny ending and beautiful descriptions. Thanks for checking out the ode workshop
Thank you!!
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Love the title so much
I love the structure of this piece! Such a great idea to examine how your perspective towards a fixture of your life has changed over the years.