I love this story and the seemingly effortless way you build in details to give a full picture of Mr. Red and his neighborhood. I love that the narrator flies in and out of the story on a fast scooter. There are stories within stories here, like this one: "He kisses a framed photo of a young woman he had cut out of the newspaper. He decided long ago that she was his mother." You've created magic!
I love this story and the seemingly effortless way you build in details to give a full picture of Mr. Red and his neighborhood. I love that the narrator flies in and out of the story on a fast scooter. There are stories within stories here, like this one: "He kisses a framed photo of a young woman he had cut out of the newspaper. He decided long ago that she was his mother." You've created magic!
Beautiful <3
I love this so much! I see you :)
Absolutely gorgeous and real. I love this <3
Love the imagery cuz! <3
What a crazy story! Your opinion on it and how you tie it together with Frankenstein is so fascinating and well done. Beautifully written too :)
Thank you sm! :)
this is beautifully written :)
Thank you, that means a lot.
Thank you! I'm happy you can relate (though not happy you're experiencing it, it isn't fun!)