Comments

Comment Commented on Posted

Thank you guys!

Tiny Write by Gali, December 15 2024 6 months ago

Wow. Astonishing piece. I'll be sitting with this one for a while. Love the title too. 

Great Nullification 6 months ago

Nice ending!!!! Clever, complicated... sweet. 

Glittering 6 months ago

What a wonderful Vignette! Love how you really dive into the physical and metaphysical mechanics of the game! Also, clever punctuation! I love a good M-dash moment! 

Togetherness 6 months ago

Your poetry isn’t too intense at all

Tiny Write by Gali, December 15 2024 6 months ago

No, no!! Intense poetry is honestly so fun to write and to read, and poems are whatever the poet is feeling and needing to say. If you think they're too intense, you can try stepping back for a poem or two, but I personally think your writing is great just how it is!

Tiny Write by Gali, December 15 2024 6 months ago

wonderful. this is - no, I'll just leave it there. no comment except wonderful all the same.

On Forgiving the Dust in My Piano 6 months ago

Thank you so much! This was actually my Christmas present for my friend group and I'm so glad they all, and you, like it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!! This means so much to me <3

i saw the most wonderful thing today 6 months ago

There's a gentleness and sensitivity to this piece that give me tender feels. Somehow, you've made crying tragically beautiful. This poem feels like an expression of pure love and acceptance.

Where Light Touches You 6 months ago

Dang, nice shot! They're especially striking against the backdrop of gray. I always make a wish when I see a double rainbow.

Double Rainbow 6 months ago