you invoke this memory so clearly and with such tenderness! I love all the details "mittened hand," "squares of hay." Also, you do such a good job describing the movement of the memory. Excellent choice of verbs --- and an choice to really highlight the verbs in the piece.
Hmm, I am also suffering from writer's block right now!! Sometimes a thing that helps is to come up with a list of titles, just random things or funny phrases you think would work as a title, and then try to write a story/poem that goes with it. Hope this helps!
This is beautifully written, every line I read made me feel so 'in the poem' if that makes any sense. Haha. Thank you for sharing this with all of us! <3
you invoke this memory so clearly and with such tenderness! I love all the details "mittened hand," "squares of hay." Also, you do such a good job describing the movement of the memory. Excellent choice of verbs --- and an choice to really highlight the verbs in the piece.
Of course! Thank youuuu <3
thank you so much you <3 good luck to you as well and keep on writing!!!
Thank you so much for your input!!!! it is so helpful and so supportive!! Good luck to you too <3
Hmm, I am also suffering from writer's block right now!! Sometimes a thing that helps is to come up with a list of titles, just random things or funny phrases you think would work as a title, and then try to write a story/poem that goes with it. Hope this helps!
Thank you! I’m taking a poetry class so it’s the most revised poem I’ve ever written(:
This is so, so pretty! It captures the sea so beautifully, and every line just feels so right.
Same here
Thank you. Yeah that definitely makes sense!
This is beautifully written, every line I read made me feel so 'in the poem' if that makes any sense. Haha. Thank you for sharing this with all of us! <3