Thank you. I was very nervous to share this as I don't write many short stories and this one is close to my heart.Thank you for being so kind.
Wow thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
This is so good!!
Trying to balance school and something else you love is always hard, and sadly does make anyone feel torn between the two. It can be hard to find a balance or needing to choose one. The picture really captures it well I think
I love the rhyming! I think it even adds to the narrator wondering about catching fireflies. Keep writing!
oooo this was so good, especially the last paragraph. Agree with everything YellowS said. What a dark and bold retelling
this is simply beautiful. What a stellar opening line too, congrats on the daily read
this made me smile
This is so interesting I keeping finding ways to interpret each line and how they fit together. really makes you think. keep writing!
Thank you. I was very nervous to share this as I don't write many short stories and this one is close to my heart.
Thank you for being so kind.
Wow thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
This is so good!!
Trying to balance school and something else you love is always hard, and sadly does make anyone feel torn between the two. It can be hard to find a balance or needing to choose one. The picture really captures it well I think
I love the rhyming! I think it even adds to the narrator wondering about catching fireflies. Keep writing!
oooo this was so good, especially the last paragraph. Agree with everything YellowS said. What a dark and bold retelling
this is simply beautiful. What a stellar opening line too, congrats on the daily read
this made me smile
This is so interesting I keeping finding ways to interpret each line and how they fit together. really makes you think. keep writing!