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What a superb use of texture, using real leaves like that! It really makes the piece come alive!

Fall Kitty 1 year ago

Your interpretation of hygge, that warm and cozy feeling, brought be the biggest smile. You're literally going for the opposite, braving the cold outdoors, doing something that raises your heartrate rather than slows it! But skiing and all that comes with it is the thing that brings you that inner warmth, in spite of the outer chill -- so how precious is that? I bet you'll be the only one who responds to this prompt in this way!

My Hygge 1 year ago

I thought to myself, "That almost looks like Vermont!" right before I noticed the title! Spot on! 

Standing in Vermont by Patrick Brady 1 year ago

Time neither hastens nor slackens for anyone... march on it does, and grow up we do. But don't rush the process! As soon as you reach adulthood, you'll realize you'd do anything to get back to where you are, right now! (Assuming your speaker's voice is just a little bit of your own too, anyway.)

The Rhythm of Imagination 1 year ago

Thank you!

Life. 1 year ago

thank you, anna! i was just making a relatable writing piece, everyone is perfect the way they are <3

nothing but an A 1 year ago

Simply beautiful. I can feel your longing and wanderlust echoing with each word. A longing I myself share. Keep writing, I can't wait to see more of your works!

Life. 1 year ago

Ah, okay! Majority of my poems are about nature, so I feel like a longer poetry book may be better, but in all honesty I have no clue! 

Tiny Write by Writer1326, October 16 2023 1 year ago

I think it depends on the content of the poetry. It its meant to be super deep or have a deeper meaning, longer or shorter can affect the way the readers understand and process the information. The most important thing would be to first analyze your writing content and decide on a length that gives you the space to develop and complete your idea(s). Short answer: It really depends on the poetry itself.

Tiny Write by Writer1326, October 16 2023 1 year ago

I wanted to do a super short story, until I can think of more detail.

The relationship of a shoe and a person. 1 year ago