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Thanks you! I think we all needed a little positivity when it’s raining in January.

In the Woods 2 years ago

Thank you!

Him and his story 2 years ago

Thanks!

Back and Forth 2 years ago

Thanks!

Back and Forth 2 years ago

Love it. The intensity of the inner monologue and the simplicity of the action adds a comedic value that is just perfect.

Back and Forth 2 years ago

Amen!!

Who am I? 2 years ago

love this.

Him and his story 2 years ago

thank you for reading! this piece is certainly darker than most of what i write, but i'm glad that it stuck out to you.

A TREE 2 years ago

This is the kind of winter we all daydream about in the summer, before we're in the midst of it. The kind without black-ice roads and a below-zero wind chill and gray slush everywhere -- just a quaint, peaceful, magical hush blanketing everything, snow twinkling in the sunlight. Today, you've reminded me to appreciate the beauty of the season.

In the Woods 2 years ago

Dark, but when it comes to climate change, we all need a kick in the pants. Contrasting an innocent, majestic tree to the unctuous, greedy desires of humankind is a unique way to shine light on the topic. The short lines in the last two stanzas are jarring and drive home the point you're making.

A TREE 2 years ago