I could feel the love emanating from this! And what better backdrop than the night sky? There's something about a starlit evening that has the ability to draw you closer to people, fills you all with wonder in a way you rarely feel in the daylight. There's an aura to this poem that lingers.
This is remarkably sweet! I was so hoping this would not take some kind of dark turn. Did this come from some kind of dream you once had? It has that sort of quality.
"Determination is the best tool to change how we live." How right you are! Words of wisdom here. If you lead with that foot in life, you will go long distances.
I'm willing to bet you tried harder than you realize... It's so easy to look back and tell ourselves we could have done so much more, achieved such high heights if only we'd applied ourselves, but the truth is, most of us are doing the best we can at the time. Believe in that about yourself!
And hey, second place is a wonderful place to be! Did you know Olympic athletes who place second feel a greater sense of dissatisfaction than those who place third? It's because second place is SO CLOSE to first, but those in third place are just so proud of themselves for having placed at all, having tried and accomplished anything at all. I try to remember that wonderful "third-place mindset" when I fall into the trap of comparing myself to others.
Woah -- it took me a minute to realize a couple of these were likely light-wrapped trees? The way they spiral out, so beautiful. Purely celestial. Wish I could have seen this show, or procession, or whatever it was!
I love that final cuplet! especially the conversational like nature of it, since it's been my experience that the more feelings i keep inside the more conversations I end up having with myself!
I could feel the love emanating from this! And what better backdrop than the night sky? There's something about a starlit evening that has the ability to draw you closer to people, fills you all with wonder in a way you rarely feel in the daylight. There's an aura to this poem that lingers.
This is remarkably sweet! I was so hoping this would not take some kind of dark turn. Did this come from some kind of dream you once had? It has that sort of quality.
"Determination is the best tool to change how we live." How right you are! Words of wisdom here. If you lead with that foot in life, you will go long distances.
I'm willing to bet you tried harder than you realize... It's so easy to look back and tell ourselves we could have done so much more, achieved such high heights if only we'd applied ourselves, but the truth is, most of us are doing the best we can at the time. Believe in that about yourself!
And hey, second place is a wonderful place to be! Did you know Olympic athletes who place second feel a greater sense of dissatisfaction than those who place third? It's because second place is SO CLOSE to first, but those in third place are just so proud of themselves for having placed at all, having tried and accomplished anything at all. I try to remember that wonderful "third-place mindset" when I fall into the trap of comparing myself to others.
Woah -- it took me a minute to realize a couple of these were likely light-wrapped trees? The way they spiral out, so beautiful. Purely celestial. Wish I could have seen this show, or procession, or whatever it was!
I really love this poem! Is this based on something or did this story just come to you?
Thank you!
I love that final cuplet! especially the conversational like nature of it, since it's been my experience that the more feelings i keep inside the more conversations I end up having with myself!
Hmmm this really made me think! I love the fable like nature of it!
Thank you! I love personification in poems.