Bravo! You've got so much creativity inside you, I can tell. Horror is one of my favorite genres to read, and this didn't disappoint. Are you an X-files fan, by chance? I remember there being an episode that takes place at a logging camp, but it sure doesn't end like this...! It's called Darkness Falls if you're interested.
A couple notes to you: I think the reader could use some explanation of what choker/setter holes are. I also think you could break this up into smaller paragraphs, which would not only make it easier on the reader's eye, but also designate more moments of suspense (a very good thing)!
We used to go to our grandparents every thanksgiving, and while we were there we would go to the "Festival of Lights" which was a park filled with holiday lights. It was always my favorite part of the holidays.
You remind me of myself at 12. The difference is that you choose to speak out--and that is a gift. That is power.
Bravo! You've got so much creativity inside you, I can tell. Horror is one of my favorite genres to read, and this didn't disappoint. Are you an X-files fan, by chance? I remember there being an episode that takes place at a logging camp, but it sure doesn't end like this...! It's called Darkness Falls if you're interested.
A couple notes to you: I think the reader could use some explanation of what choker/setter holes are. I also think you could break this up into smaller paragraphs, which would not only make it easier on the reader's eye, but also designate more moments of suspense (a very good thing)!
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Thanks!
We used to go to our grandparents every thanksgiving, and while we were there we would go to the "Festival of Lights" which was a park filled with holiday lights. It was always my favorite part of the holidays.
Amazing!
I simply placed the camera on the object.
This is so cool! How did you take the picture?
Probably science-fiction, but I love fantasy and mysteries too!