Omg the way there's a part of this that repeats with even more resentment and desperation and anger is crazy I got goose bumps and there wasn't even an exclamation point fantastic piece!
So beautiful and haunting and visually stunning. You really conveyed the wanderer to well, I'm curious about him and it makes me think of other wanderers I've seen or heard about and wonder about their lives. Such a gift to portray this mysterious figure in such a compelling way.
I can feel and picture this moment so well from your poem!
Yeah! It does have a song-like rhythm to it!
Yeah, this is about the L.A. garment workers! Thank you so much
That's awesome!
This is a partially true story of a nordic skiing race!
thanks! I wrote this like a song, then put into poem form, so thats where I got the repeating
This is such a beautiful reminder.
They are my friends and the are climbing up onto our garage, we have a tree house up there!
Omg the way there's a part of this that repeats with even more resentment and desperation and anger is crazy I got goose bumps and there wasn't even an exclamation point fantastic piece!
So beautiful and haunting and visually stunning. You really conveyed the wanderer to well, I'm curious about him and it makes me think of other wanderers I've seen or heard about and wonder about their lives. Such a gift to portray this mysterious figure in such a compelling way.