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This is so perfect.  Infinity has so many definitions, and this poem somehow captures them all in its six short lines.  I love it!

What is Infinity? 2 years ago

This is so beautiful! It looks like a painting.

Mirror Lake 2 years ago

I love this! You go into details that pulled me in right away and you smoothly transition one sentence into to the other!

I should have told him I loved him 2 years ago

Writing wasn't really a huge thing for me at first, it was just some silly hobby I had to let my creativity shine through other windows than just art- since art wasn't my strong suit. Eventually, I moved in the 6th grade to a small apartment complex and my mom stumbled across YWP in the newspaper. She read a little about it and thought it would suit me well. Then after signing up and making an account I got really into writing and wrote on here. 

I am very proud to be a part of this wonderful community of people and wish the very best to newcomers along the way! 

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 27 2023 2 years ago

I've done that before, many times. But some writings I haven't, some have a spark about them that I can't just redo. There's also something ever so welcoming about having mistakes and errors in your past writings, so when a month or 2 rolls around you can see where you were with your writings and how you used to write. Sometimes I'll look at other peoples writings and see a spelling mistake or grammar mistake, but I don't really notice it all that much because I'm not reading it to criticize- I'm there to read a possibly beautiful and life-changing writing. 

It also reminds me that I can make mistakes too and it's okay if a writing from yesterday isn't as good as one I could do today. 

Anyways, sorry for such a ramble. Hope you have a lovely rest of your week!

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, November 16 2023 2 years ago

This is AMAZING! The detail, especially on the shoes, is incredible!

A Little Bit Worse 2 years ago

Photographer’s note; the r_photography1326 watermark is my watermark on instagram! 

Blurry Vision 2 years ago

thank you so much!!

The Gift 2 years ago

Thank you. It means the world to me. And I’m really happy you enjoyed reading it the way I hoped. Also about the way I use line breaks is super sweet of you to say. I think it’s what shows to the reader how to capture the words in the perspective I wrote it in. 

Again, thank you so much, and hope you have a lovely evening. 

Sleep? We don’t know her 2 years ago

I feel like I could envision everything that was happening just by the dialogue! That’s so cool!

Smoke Signal 2 years ago