I got a very old text message today.
I remember when it was sent many yesterdays past.
It dropped down from the top of my screen in a little box,
but I didn’t tap it in time, and it slipped away.
The message smelled like chlorine from a hotel pool that I swam in once,
and that I’ll never see again,
and it looked like a messy room full of silly secrets
and FaceTime calls with people
whose final image in my head was taken from a U-Haul van,
and the message said come play with me,
and the message said he’s not my friend,
and the message said what if we get in trouble?
and the message said I don’t say this a lot, but
and the message said we’re not little anymore, but
and the message said someday we can be little again,
and the message said I love you.
Comments
I've never read a text message that came with an association to a scent or a particularly vivid mental picture before, like this. But there IS so much subtext (ha) within our words, so often, and that extends to text messages. That this brought up such emotion and conjured up memories and led to your own translation of the message speaks to the beauty of language, even within our (often) impersonal, modern forms of communication.
AAAAAAAAAH oh my god that repetition killed me in my heart of hearts!! "and the message said someday we can be little again" I was almost crying!!! such a great job and amazing use of repetition! <3
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