she wanted him because he made her feel
everything
but she still felt guilty
for wanting him
to want her
guilt
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anabelle
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Comments
This poem is beautiful and has a complex feel while still being understandable and relatable. Splitting up the word "everything" from the first line was such a smart idea that made it feel so much more powerful.
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