Pretend I am alright,
act like I’m just fine.
Wonder if you see the battle march
in every step I stride.
Pretend I am alright,
act like I’m just fine.
Hope you don't catch resentful rage
hiding in my gaze.
Pretend I am alright,
act like I’m just fine.
Hope you don't see the bitter pain in my eyes.
Pretend I am alright,
act like I’m just fine,
trying not the show the hurt.
Can’t let them know how the memories bind
and haunt me in the night
'cause it's best for you I keep it all inside.
Pretend I am alright,
act like I’m just fine.
Know there's nothing else that matters
than what's on the outside.
Pretend I am alright,
act like I’m just fine,
stifle every judging word
that burns within my mind.
Pretend I am alright,
act like I’m just fine.
All your words now feel like lies
and my trust is now broken.
Don't believe anything they say.
Count all the times you’ve been betrayed.
Watch, as they fumble once again.
Breaking, promises they can’t defend.
And I see it's time
to give up hope
and close
my
door.
Let go,
just let go.
Pretend I am alright,
act like I’m just fine.
Swallow all the sorrow,
toughen up this heart of mine.
Pretend I am alright,
act like I’m just fine.
Reminding me that you don't care
is what brings me true despair,
and is what’s numbing me inside.
Comments
Feedback welcome! It'd be nice if I could get at least a few more things to rhyme...
First I think this is gorgeous just the way it is but, I took it and made it flow and rhyme a bit better if your interested. I'm absolutely no poet but, I love rhyming.
Omg really?! TYSM Let me see!!
I love rhyming too :) Helps compensate for my lack of metaphor lol (and basically everything else)
Pretend I’m alright,
Act like I’m just fine,
Do you see the battle march,
In every step I climb?
Pretend I’m alright,
Act like I’m just fine,
Hope you don’t see the bitter pain,
That hides behind my eyes.
Pretend I’m alright,
Act like I’m just fine,
Hope you don’t catch the resentful rage,
That burns within my mind.
Pretend I’m alright,
Act like I’m just fine,
Trying not to show the hurt,
Won’t let you see the memories that bind,
They haunt me every night,
But it's best for you, I keep it all inside.
Pretend I’m alright,
Act like I’m just fine,
Know that nothing matters more,
Than what you see on the outside.
Pretend I’m alright,
Act like I’m just fine,
Won’t explain how my trust is broken,
How all the words feel like lies.
Don’t believe a thing they say,
Count the times I’ve been betrayed,
Watch as they stumble once again,
Breaking promises they can’t defend.
And I see it’s time to give up hope,
And close this door,
Letting go.
Pretend I’m alright,
Act like I’m just fine,
Swallowing sorrow,
Toughening my heart inside.
Pretend I’m alright,
Act like I’m just fine,
Reminding me you don’t care,
And this numbness is all mine.
Its okay if you don't like it haha
Omg I absolutely LOVE IT!! I never thought anyone would ever take my writing so seriously, thank you, it means a lot <3
Hopefully I'll get to making revisions tomorrow :D
Of course. Nobody takes mine very seriously either.
aaaaaand revised!
Thank you so much again! :))
Anytime : )
<3
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