Astronomy room.
post storm; window open; wet.
cooling Earth soaked air.
Posted in response to the challenge Haiku.
morning after the first rain in weeks
More by twoblueviolets
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Rosy Retrospection (Haiku)
I miss you more than
I loved you. Still, I love you
–less than I feared you. -
the sound of a room during a poetry reading
hushed murmurs, a squeaking chair
low mmms and ahhhs and snaps
and a poet standing dead center to begin dissection —the act of pulling out an intestine to test the color for ink
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To: Girl Not Named Georgia
555 Far Away College Dorm
City with No Cornfields, Peach State
661.9 Miles Away, USA
Comments
What a lovely haiku. Keep writing!
Yes! The power of haikus is to capture a moment in simplest terms, and this is a perfect example of a poet capturing a scene simply and perfectly.
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