Astronomy room.
post storm; window open; wet.
cooling Earth soaked air.
Posted in response to the challenge Haiku.
Astronomy room.
post storm; window open; wet.
cooling Earth soaked air.
Posted in response to the challenge Haiku.
Mama/an eagle.
We/weasels/deer in headlights.
She flies on. We stay.
After Robert Frost's Stopping By the Woods on a Snowy Evening
A room lit by one lamp,
shoes next to a wireframe bed;
an artist's home where art and time have made their stamp.
A room lit by one lamp
where the cozy gloom clamps
Comments
What a lovely haiku. Keep writing!
Yes! The power of haikus is to capture a moment in simplest terms, and this is a perfect example of a poet capturing a scene simply and perfectly.
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