I wonder when I’ll talk to you again
The way I used to, back when
Things are different - things have changed
I wonder when I’ll see you again
You seem so distant, but so do I
You have been gone for what seems like an eternity
I wonder...
The way I used to, back when
Things are different - things have changed
I wonder when I’ll see you again
You seem so distant, but so do I
You have been gone for what seems like an eternity
I wonder...
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jbird18
Apr 20, 2017
The simplicity of the words, their repetition, and your syntax craft a little poem that flows, for me, in much the same way that water does over rocks in a stream. I like that you leave punctuation off of the ends of each line. The way line three cuts off line two is tied with the whole poem as my favorite part of this poem!