I remember that warm summer night,
we argued about who could jump farther off the swings,
we were only 14.
It down poured,
they didn't set the fireworks off,
you didn't care,
neither did I.
You were happy with the glow stick I gave you,
you kept it for weeks,
for all I know you still have it,
probably not,
but I like to think maybe you keep it to remember that night like I do,
wishful thinking,
you used to say that a lot when you would talk about us.
I was only sad that we had to leave early,
we played basketball that night before the rain,
you'd never played before,
but you made a three pointer,
of course you bragged,
I didn't mind,
I thought it was cute.
My friend asked if we were together,
I said no,
like the idea was crazy,
I loved you.
4 days later we were together,
not for long you left 2 months after that,
my heart didn't though,
it's been years,
but I am still yours,
and I think,
in a way,
I always will be,
because 3 years later and I still love you.
Comments
I rlly like this!!!!! and yes in response to ur tiny write do what you want but I enjoy reading storytelling poems like this so if u like them too keep writing!
Thank you so much! Yeah I do kinda enjoy writing them I've just been look for other people's opinions too because sometimes I think I write something good and it's actually trash lol
hmm yeah I understand the feeling lol I feel like all writers doubt the pieces that end up being the most recognized or favorite ones haha
Fr every time I put up something I think might suck are the ones that get the most recognition and the ones I think are gonna do really good don't even get one like
YES same tho like poems will get in vtdigger and im like wait when did i write that what poem is that???? and its something i didn't even think about posting i just did it randomly
Lol that's so real though, I've been wanting to get something of mine in vt digger and i still haven't but they did put one in the rutland herald so that was really exciting, it was one I didn't think anyone would read to lol
oooohhh a newspaper!!!!!! honestly i'd love that because nobody really reads the life & culture section on vtdigger anyways lol, also just keep posting and you'll get something on there!! they do a new one every single week :D
Yeah I was really excited when I got told they were putting it in there, yeah I try to post a lot but sometimes I get writers block lol
sameeee writer's block is the worst ugh my solution is to annoy my friends with "gimme 3 random words" and its always like words from a song stuck in their head or whatever but they love the poems I write them
That's a great idea! Time to start bugging my friends lmao
yess lol
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