I-
I wish-
I wish I-
I wish I was-
I wish I was loved-
I wish I was loved by-
I wish I was loved by you-
But-
But it-
But it will-
But it will never-
But it will never be-
But it will never be me-
I-
I wish-
I wish I-
I wish I was-
I wish I was her-
You-
You love-
You love only-
You love only her-
All-
All of-
All of her-
Not-
Not me-
Her-
Comments
Ive never seen a poem like this and I LOVE it. I read it as if someone was choking or sobbing or angry in the spaces between the words. Mic drop. Keep writing
Hearing that feed back makes me unbelievably happy, thank you so much! This is the first poem ive written like this but maybe ill write more!
Truly this is an awesome structure to work with!
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