lily pads & lotuses
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dead/alive on november 14th
In 12 days it will be November 14th
I have no reason to care about November 14th
and I have every reason to write a poem about it.
Maybe by November 14th, I won't drive 70 miles an hour
past the gun shop on Route 2
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renewal (rough draft)
in space, the atoms found their mark
somewhere far from everybody's heart
from then on, on a purge to the deep end
you persist, someone told you the answer
lies under 6 feet of sea sand.
Comments
These are so stark and sharp in resolution, and beautiful in their composition! I know it's not your usual subject matter, but I would absolutely love to see you write a poem (even just a haiku) inspired by these!
Great idea ty for the feedback!! Sorry I didn’t see this till now!!
I love these photos! they're so clean and crisp and so well done :D
thanks!!
thank you
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