Thank you for your feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I wanted to end the story in a way that was striking and made the reader think about the damage that was done.
Your story captured me every step of the way, and it was perfect: just as I got comfortable with something, it was changed, which may not sound good but it actually was. The ending too is so sad but true and needed to happen.
you're welcome!! have fun writing :D
It's called The Darkling's Prey... I just need to finish the chapter illustrations before I publish, so hopefully I can lock in
I loved that book too! The different character perspectives made the book very captivating.
Awesome! That’s so cool!!!
Do you have any suggestions on how to make it better?
Thank you for your feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I wanted to end the story in a way that was striking and made the reader think about the damage that was done.
Thank you!!
I really love this! The words are so careful and true, and I was enraptured so quickly!
That's so fun! Thanks!
Your story captured me every step of the way, and it was perfect: just as I got comfortable with something, it was changed, which may not sound good but it actually was. The ending too is so sad but true and needed to happen.