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This is amazing

Cactus 5 months ago

Also, things really don't have to rhyme. Or, you can make them ryme too. In a flaming lips song, Wayne rhymed "orange" with "store". (HOW). So, just saying, rhymes really don't have to be perfect. 

Tiny Write by Omi Homie, June 1 2024 5 months ago

Its totally okay to be nervous! Try to remember that this is a new period of your life and its a time to experiment. its helpful to be authentic and really explore your interests. This will also help you make friends! 

Tiny Write by bumblebea, June 4 2024 5 months ago

I love this poem, and how you showed the differences between Summer and Spring. And how you personify spring, as if it could break in your hands. :)

Fragile 5 months ago

That actually sounds quite good. Life is weird, and rambling thoughts are just part of it. 

Book Club post by LongBilledCurlew, May 28 2024 5 months ago

Yes I do too! I'll usually have a little brain crisis watching them, because life is so crazy. We're all going to die someday, and I am spending half an hour of this life along with thirty other people on this red double-decker driving through London, and how did we all end up here? 

Tiny Write by Bharat Dwivedi, May 26 2024 5 months ago

Aggh that sounds so awful! I don't have any food allergies but I am EXTREMELY allergic to penicillin. I had strep in January and took medicine; got hives a week later, and now I have to go to an allergist to test if I'm allergic to other medicine. ALLERGIES ARE THE WORST.

Tiny Write by Sparrow, May 27 2024 5 months ago

I sing my own made-up songs sometimes while biking/showering/walking to school, and while they aren't great, they make me feel good and I get bursts of dopamine when good lyrics seemingly pop out of nowhere. I recommend just starting to sing a little, about literally anything, and then trying to add on to whatever you've made. Good luck!!

Tiny Write by Omi Homie, June 1 2024 5 months ago

haha me too!

Book Club post by OverTheRainbow, May 26 2024 5 months ago

You should! They're awesome

Book Club post by OverTheRainbow, May 26 2024 5 months ago