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This is such a good poem. I loved all of the allusions to her work and the poem is just beautiful. :)

To Emily 4 months ago

Fantasy books are kinda mostly made of tropes so idk how helpful this will be, but I enjoy fantasy books where the characters know something is wrong in their world/life and have to either fight against it or try to discover what it is and stop it. Hope this helps!

Tiny Write by mmae_ee, December 5 2024 4 months ago

thank you!! that sucks though :( 

quiet winter day 4 months ago

What a sweet image! Also lucky that you had school off, we were begging for a snow day but didn't get one. :)

quiet winter day 4 months ago

Beautiful. I really loved this one!

A Palmful of Metaphors 4 months ago

What a beautiful tribute. I think Emily Dickinson would love this!

To Emily 4 months ago

Yeah, I definitely relate to that. I just felt like I needed to voice some of the feelings and imagery that comes with my dreams so I can let them go I guess :P Thanks!

Dreaming 4 months ago

Thank you!

A Palmful of Metaphors 4 months ago

Oh my goodness, thank you for your amazing comment! I admire you as a writer as well and love reading your work. I will definitely never let my love of poetry fizzle out, and will try to push myself to submit to contests and magazines more. Thank you so much for the feedback on this poem, too! I am always looking to improve!

Poetry Club Meeting (Rm 222, Dec. 4) 4 months ago

I really liked this poem. It expresses the intangible nature of dreams in such an ethereal way. It reminded me of some of my own dreams and brought forth images that I forgot until they all came crashing back.  

Dreaming 4 months ago