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Thank you!!  ♡ 

The Girl and the Sky 5 months ago

I feel this. This poem is really good. Keep writing :)

How It Always Goes: An Angry Rant 5 months ago

I love this poem so much!! I like all the rhymes and the ending. Brilliant :0

bittersweet end 5 months ago

This is so good!  I love the imagery and the plot.  This could be a really cute picture book!

The Girl and the Sky 5 months ago

I love this poem so much...so relatable and heartbreaking! :)

T 5 months ago

love this :)

stranger to blue water 5 months ago

Thanks! I will try that.

Tiny Write by riphssmyth, June 5 2025 5 months ago

welcome :D

stranger to blue water 5 months ago

Hi riphssmyth, have you tried unclicking the Published box at the bottom of your post? This should save your draft but not publish it. When you are ready to add to it, search the title, and continue writing. Click the Published box when you're done. Let me know if you have any trouble with that.

Tiny Write by riphssmyth, June 5 2025 5 months ago

Thanks!

Maybe They Don't 5 months ago