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This is so good. I love the description, I feel like I can taste the food and like I’m there on the tractor. This is great!!!

Thank you!! 

This is so good!!!! The influence and repetition of the cedars make it feel almost like a poem!! Also, now I am hungry for mango. :D so good

Wow!! Congratulations!!! I will definitely check it out :)

thank you so much!

It's a piece of colorful paper under a clear bowl. I used an eyedropper to make the splashes and a flash to freeze them. 

This is beautiful! Great work, keep writing.

I love this story so much!!

Beautiful story, powerful connection between One and Two!

Thank you!