There is so much distinct, dark, chaotic emotion displayed here, yet it all overlaps and intertwines together perfectly as a whole and creates amazing richness. The colors, the detail you included (those plaid pants--!), the smudging technique and scribbly style, they all work.
Sunsets are endlessly inspirational, and so too is the night sky, as you said! Looking up at the stars, discussing life, makes for a decidedly sweet and tranquil moment between characters. I like the simplicity of this scene.
By the way, I think "envelop" might be the word you're looking for ("elope" means to get spontaneously hitched).
I've never attended to a sick loved one in a hospital waiting room, yet I felt that I was there, experiencing that anxious anticipation alongside you. There is a sparseness to this piece that works to its advantage, adding to the "sterility" you describe.
I have read the sequel liked it a lot! I also really enjoyed One for the Murphy’s. I think you would like Greetings from Witness Protection, it’s also about a foster kid but is a bit different in the way she comes into the family’s lives. Definitely worth a read if your interested.
I think I'll reread it!
yep, and thanks!! i'll make sure to edit it and keep that in mind :)
There is so much distinct, dark, chaotic emotion displayed here, yet it all overlaps and intertwines together perfectly as a whole and creates amazing richness. The colors, the detail you included (those plaid pants--!), the smudging technique and scribbly style, they all work.
Sunsets are endlessly inspirational, and so too is the night sky, as you said! Looking up at the stars, discussing life, makes for a decidedly sweet and tranquil moment between characters. I like the simplicity of this scene.
By the way, I think "envelop" might be the word you're looking for ("elope" means to get spontaneously hitched).
Thanks for the recommendation! I think I liked one for the murphys better than the war that saved my life.
I've never attended to a sick loved one in a hospital waiting room, yet I felt that I was there, experiencing that anxious anticipation alongside you. There is a sparseness to this piece that works to its advantage, adding to the "sterility" you describe.
Oh, the suspense! What happens next? Keep writing!
I have read the sequel liked it a lot! I also really enjoyed One for the Murphy’s. I think you would like Greetings from Witness Protection, it’s also about a foster kid but is a bit different in the way she comes into the family’s lives. Definitely worth a read if your interested.
this sounds reallyyy good,, i'll try to find it and read it!!! thankksss :)))
me too I read They Both Die At The End and pulled an all-nighter to finish it lol