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GOOSEBUMPS. FREAKING GOOSEBUMPS. Amazing work. The last paragraph...the mark of an excellent dark-fiction writer is a terrifyingly great last sentence/paragraph.

Striking Crimson 1 year ago

oh, you are so welcome and thank you for commenting about it!

Last Day of School 1 year ago

This is so, so, so good. It makes me want to cry, it’s so touching. I just graduated from 8th grade and am having a similar situation, of nostalgia and sadness yet excitement at what’s to come. Thank you for writing this.

Last Day of School 1 year ago

Thank you!!!!

Last Day of School 1 year ago

This is so incredible.  Every word you chose, every metaphor, is perfectly elegant.  I especially love "I am light-headed, drunk/on the heady perfume of summer."  It's just so gorgeous!

Last Day of School 1 year ago

Yup! It's excellent

Tiny Write by OverTheRainbow, February 6 2024 1 year ago

Thank you so much!

Last Day of School 1 year ago

I have no words. This is beautiful.

Last Day of School 1 year ago

Ah yes, The Girl From the Sea. Have you read it?

Tiny Write by OverTheRainbow, February 6 2024 1 year ago

It's so fun. I'm getting interviewed for it.

Tiny Write by Sparrow, June 10 2024 1 year ago