This is so beautiful. I love how you made each stanza a bite of watermelon, and how it ends without a period, not a true ending, for nothing ever is, with, fades away. Excellent!!
I love going to camp as well! What was the coolest thing that happened to you last summer? I met my cousin by accident. Oh also I was just passsing by Camp Billings and all I could think was "Am I seeing AddisonLaBelle right now?"
I’ve never read anything more accurate about writing in my life. Beautiful figurative language. Thank you so much for writing something that captures the beauty of writing. Writers like you are my heroes :)
This is so beautiful. I love how you made each stanza a bite of watermelon, and how it ends without a period, not a true ending, for nothing ever is, with, fades away. Excellent!!
I can’t think of how to phrase this. It’s more than beautiful. It’s… there isn’t a strong enough word for how powerful this is.
Is this the comic book character Nubia?
I love going to camp as well! What was the coolest thing that happened to you last summer? I met my cousin by accident. Oh also I was just passsing by Camp Billings and all I could think was "Am I seeing AddisonLaBelle right now?"
Thank you so much!!!
I absolutely agree! This poem describes this indescribable feeling of writing sometimes.
I’ve never read anything more accurate about writing in my life. Beautiful figurative language. Thank you so much for writing something that captures the beauty of writing. Writers like you are my heroes :)
Thank you so much for the positive feedback! I'm so glad you liked it :)
Thanks! It's probably my favorite photo that I got while out there, helps that I live next to these woods and trail!
It looks like a fantastical forest that I’d read in a fairy tale! So cool!