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Well said :)

Past, Present, Future 1 year ago

I exist, lol. But I get what she means. It's not always easy to go to someone

Float 1 year ago

yeah :)

Take Me Away 1 year ago

Yessss, I totally understand! It feels like school breaks are just cars speeding by. We need a petition for students to have more breaks in school...loll :) 

Take Me Away 1 year ago

Hi! I need comments for the last line, which sounds better? 

penny for your thoughts? 

or 

taste it,— is it enough?

Thank You! 

pensées sur le chou-fleur 1 year ago

:)

crushed little stars that i hold in my hands. 1 year ago

thank youuu!! also yeah, definitely lolll :)

chokehold 1 year ago

The stars remind me of children :)

crushed little stars that i hold in my hands. 1 year ago

Great poem! I love the chokehold idea :)

The best us kids can do is find support and learn to protect ourselves ig. Bonus if you can find ways to bend unfair rules, now that would be fun

chokehold 1 year ago

You are definitely not alone :) It's really hard to remember to slow down sometimes, especially when society tells you to just keep going, to be stronger, better, smarter, etc... I think it's really important to remind yourself to take a break sometimes, even if that feels like slacking, or not doing what you're supposed to do. But taking care of yourself and giving yourself time is just as important. 

Tiny Write by A.K. Patel, March 7 2025 1 year ago