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Almost like a vortex into another world, and he's disappearing behind it! The distortion of the background adds to the overall effect of the piece.

Shielded 11 months ago

The shadow-play on your ceiling is so geometric and cool! I wonder if you would see a subtler version if you turned on the light.

Darkness and Light 11 months ago

I feel it too. The despair. I appreciate your last two lines, your determination to come together with others and still try to make a difference. And I hope you do let yourself cry if that's what you need to do; it can be so cathartic.

Mundane 11 months ago

This is really good

Who am I? 11 months ago

It is rare to find such poetry sometimes-- each line more impactful than before

Drill It Out 11 months ago

This story  is inspierd by the photo Revenge of the Goldfish by Sandy Skoglund.

The Goldfish 11 months ago

Awesome, I definitely will!

Book Club post by QueenBee, November 11 2024 11 months ago

There is also a major mystery component and a lot of twists!

Book Club post by Coco, November 14 2024 11 months ago

I just started The Hunger Games as well! So far it’s really good. My sister had recommended it to me and I recommend it to anyone else! 

Book Club post by QueenBee, November 11 2024 11 months ago

Yesss the Hunger Games is so good! The sequels are also really good you should read those.

Book Club post by QueenBee, November 11 2024 11 months ago