You are very welcome, you deserve it! And I am in the same predicament. Try thinking about, like, what is Aily going to think next? Is one of the Aldridges going to join her or are they going to set up their own hunt? Will there be a public/private funeral or will the deaths be hushed up, making it even more of an emotional uphill climb for anyone as they attempt to find out who did it? Sorry, that got into a rant; don't let me take over your story, but I hope that helped!
um so this poem started with a less dark intent and kind of spiraled; sorry if I've offended you. and if I have, or if you have one of those blue american flags and believe in it, please don't speak to me. I am sorry, but I will not remove this post.
AAAAHHH this is such a great short-poem short-chapter series and I need more!! This is awesome. Especially the title, which is often the hardest thing to write. Nice world-building and character development!!
I am a justifiably mad fan of anything Wonderland-iful, and the ending definitely goes in that book!!! This is a funny and excellent story with a great, punny twist at the end. keep writing!
You are very welcome, you deserve it! And I am in the same predicament. Try thinking about, like, what is Aily going to think next? Is one of the Aldridges going to join her or are they going to set up their own hunt? Will there be a public/private funeral or will the deaths be hushed up, making it even more of an emotional uphill climb for anyone as they attempt to find out who did it? Sorry, that got into a rant; don't let me take over your story, but I hope that helped!
Omg thank you, this means the world to me!! Hopefully I'll post the next chapters soon, I'm in a bit of a writing slump :P
ikr? it was super cool in person too, tysm!!
ikr? It’s was super cool in person too, tysm!!
:DD thank you!
that’s a super interesting perspective- i love it, thank you!
thank you so much, means a lot :D
um so this poem started with a less dark intent and kind of spiraled; sorry if I've offended you. and if I have, or if you have one of those blue american flags and believe in it, please don't speak to me. I am sorry, but I will not remove this post.
AAAAHHH this is such a great short-poem short-chapter series and I need more!! This is awesome. Especially the title, which is often the hardest thing to write. Nice world-building and character development!!
I am a justifiably mad fan of anything Wonderland-iful, and the ending definitely goes in that book!!! This is a funny and excellent story with a great, punny twist at the end. keep writing!