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wow. just wow.

A Letter I Can't Send 1 year ago

Roxy! YWP Alumni have a special place in our hearts, so please drop in anytime and post away. We love to read your writing! Thank you for sharing with us such a profound and personal memory of camp and childhood. 

Loon Song 1 year ago

Thank you!!!

A Split in the Road 1 year ago

Ethereal! The crystal-clear quality of that lake -- it's a true mirror. I'd do anything to visit someday!

Mirror Lake 1 year ago

The imagery here is bright and sparkling. You've convinced me that there is always beauty surrounding me, I just have to look a bit harder to find it. The nod to the seasons at the end is lovely!

A Split in the Road 1 year ago

Ahh, you've truly captured the spirit of Dickinson, not only in your dashes and capitalizations but in your theme! So funny, that she was such a recluse but could give us such wonderful advice about how to approach the world. This certainly does!

"Venture Out -" Inspired by Emily Dickinson 1 year ago

This is so perfect.  Infinity has so many definitions, and this poem somehow captures them all in its six short lines.  I love it!

What is Infinity? 1 year ago

This is so beautiful! It looks like a painting.

Mirror Lake 1 year ago

I love this! You go into details that pulled me in right away and you smoothly transition one sentence into to the other!

I should have told him I loved him 1 year ago

Writing wasn't really a huge thing for me at first, it was just some silly hobby I had to let my creativity shine through other windows than just art- since art wasn't my strong suit. Eventually, I moved in the 6th grade to a small apartment complex and my mom stumbled across YWP in the newspaper. She read a little about it and thought it would suit me well. Then after signing up and making an account I got really into writing and wrote on here. 

I am very proud to be a part of this wonderful community of people and wish the very best to newcomers along the way! 

Tiny Write by Anna_banana, October 27 2023 1 year ago