
My eyelids stay together
every blink
a little longer than usual wishing
I were still asleep
I don't remember not sleeping
last night
but I guess
that's just the way it is
first block
The red truck blue truck cap
Bright blue, not pretty
Like dancing eyes no
This is down to business blue eyes hardened
After too many people said no
After too many yesses didn’t work out
It was like your second cousin,
the one who stopped coming
to Thanksgiving
most of the time
but shows up sometimes
and you remember a picture
of her holding baby you
with blond curls and energy always
Comments
So peaceful. A quiet winter sky wearing her very best hues, mirrored so perfectly by the color of the shadowed snow on the ground.
I love the way that the brown 0f the trees sweep across the page and is a warm color like the sky. I also love that the snow on the ground matches the snow on the mountain. Overall, I love how the colors are consistent throughout the picture.
Thank you! It really struck me when I saw it how calming and coordinated the colors were.
Layer upon gorgeous layer-- field, forest, mountain, and sky.
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