lily pads & lotuses
More by elise.writer
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renewal (rough draft)
in space, the atoms found their mark
somewhere far from everybody's heart
from then on, on a purge to the deep end
you persist, someone told you the answer
lies under 6 feet of sea sand.
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fragile foundation
every twist of inadequacy's blade
(each one worse than the previous)
fell in a rhythmic order, one that your silence
carried in. did you hate me?
you'd never say so. so blindly, i never changed.
Comments
These are so stark and sharp in resolution, and beautiful in their composition! I know it's not your usual subject matter, but I would absolutely love to see you write a poem (even just a haiku) inspired by these!
Great idea ty for the feedback!! Sorry I didn’t see this till now!!
I love these photos! they're so clean and crisp and so well done :D
thanks!!
thank you
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