lily pads & lotuses
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a year ago today, i wrote a poem,
and i remember i was really proud of it.
hung it up on my wall and everything when it made the newspaper.
a year ago today, i took the grey-brown frown of november
and molded it into metaphors with my own two hands. looking -
Why I Love Stars
Flash on, flash off.
Incapturable, immeasurable.
Maybe it won't be this way forever
but today, only we can see them. Just us.
Our little human secret.
White dots, bits of erasure
on a dark canvas.
Comments
These are so stark and sharp in resolution, and beautiful in their composition! I know it's not your usual subject matter, but I would absolutely love to see you write a poem (even just a haiku) inspired by these!
Great idea ty for the feedback!! Sorry I didn’t see this till now!!
I love these photos! they're so clean and crisp and so well done :D
thanks!!
thank you
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