I write with a knife
It cuts into my heart
Spilling it onto the paper
My emotions
My thoughts
Painted with blood
Once I start
There is no stopping
I bleed
Begging for someone
To bandage me
To keep me safe
From my emotions
Writing with a knife
Is dangerous
It leads to
Your true colors
Showing
It leads to
Vulnerability
It leads to
People seeing
You
And yet
Writing with a knife
Is freeing
It is wearing your heart on our sleeve
And letting everyone know
How you feel
Writing with a knife
Is painful
And yet it is
Exactly what I need
This poem is a metaphor, I am not in pain physically or mentally. I recently read this poem to my dad and he thought I was so I just wanted to make it clear that I am OK!
Comments
"Wearing your heart on your sleeve and letting everyone know how you feel...writing with a knife is painful and yet exactly what I need," a powerful line to end a powerful piece
Thank you!
This poem is so good!! I love how you paint the picture so well with small sentences.
Thanks :)
Hi y'all! Just wanna let you know that this is a metaphor and I am not in pain, mentally or physically. I recently read this poem to my dad and he thought it was so I just wanted to make it clear
Glad! I did take it as a metaphor but I do appreciate the clarification too :)
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