The stars above
know our love.
Written across the seas
like melodic keys.
Wind sweeps us away,
settling secrets with the day.
Whispers of the night
shine true
when the stars above-
see through,
knowing our love.
Stars Above & Love
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Comments
Writer1326, there's always such a dreamy quality to your writing, and an inherent simplicity that allows an emotion to shine through. This piece sparkles!
Thank you so much!
"Here I love you.
In the dark pines the wind disentangles itself.
[...]
And as I love you, the pines in the wind
want to sing your name with their leaves of wire"
- Pablo Neruda, Twenty love poems and a song of despair
- a poem your writing reminded me of. i recommend you read it, here's a link!
Ooh okay, thank you!
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