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yeah I agree with bumblebea & twoblueviolets, try having your MC kind of montage through some moments where he was being either obviously horrible (audience anger at a good read moment!) or more subtly bad (realization). hope your writing goes well!

Tiny Write by June, May 15 2025 10 months ago

omg congrats!!!!

Tiny Write by Alex, May 15 2025 10 months ago

Francesca, I love this! From the vision of this piece down to the description, it's so beautiful in a meaningful way! 

Baby Blue 10 months ago

Thanks for your ideas! They are very helpful! :)

Tiny Write by June, May 15 2025 10 months ago

I personally love Brooklyn 99 because all the characters are amazing and also Gilmore girls because the humor is spot on 

Tiny Write by bumblebea, May 13 2025 10 months ago

This is so relatable - I definitely feel your pain :( persevere, and something may come of this relationship! Good luck!

Falling Faster 10 months ago

Congratulations! That's so cool!

Tiny Write by Alex, May 15 2025 10 months ago

that is amazing what's it called

Tiny Write by Alex, May 15 2025 10 months ago

Thanks so much!!! <33333

Reflection 10 months ago

I'm glad that you like this platform!

Tiny Write by Writer1326, May 15 2025 10 months ago