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I loved that book too! The different character perspectives made the book very captivating. 

Book Club post by abigail_and_bean, March 21 2025 10 months ago

Awesome! That’s so cool!!!

Tiny Write by Alex, May 15 2025 10 months ago

Thank you!!

Dinner With You 10 months ago

I really love this!  The words are so careful and true, and I was enraptured so quickly!  

Dinner With You 10 months ago

That's so fun! Thanks!

Tiny Write by Popcorn, May 19 2025 10 months ago

I like them too!! I do a thing with my friends a lot when we're bored in class - they give me 3 random words and I write them a short poem. it works super well for writer's block and I love walking through the hallways and seeing my poems taped up in people's lockers :D here's one if you want it: Menu. Mist. Defendant. Fortune. Breath.

Tiny Write by Popcorn, May 19 2025 10 months ago

yeah I agree with bumblebea & twoblueviolets, try having your MC kind of montage through some moments where he was being either obviously horrible (audience anger at a good read moment!) or more subtly bad (realization). hope your writing goes well!

Tiny Write by June, May 15 2025 10 months ago

omg congrats!!!!

Tiny Write by Alex, May 15 2025 10 months ago

Francesca, I love this! From the vision of this piece down to the description, it's so beautiful in a meaningful way! 

Baby Blue 10 months ago

Thanks for your ideas! They are very helpful! :)

Tiny Write by June, May 15 2025 10 months ago