I think alliteration is one of the most underrated literary devices (and one with a long long history in English literature) and this makes fabulous use of it! I particularly love "submissive soul-soiled" Soul-soiled! (an alliterative compound!) "Vilified verefied" and "inbred intellectual injustice" are also awesome.
I love this so much!!! I can feel space and time contracting and expanding and its wonderful! I also love the switch to the second person in the last stanza. My introducing a witness you make your "universe" feel more real.
Congratulations, that’s so awesome!! I’m so excited to check it out!
I think alliteration is one of the most underrated literary devices (and one with a long long history in English literature) and this makes fabulous use of it! I particularly love "submissive soul-soiled" Soul-soiled! (an alliterative compound!) "Vilified verefied" and "inbred intellectual injustice" are also awesome.
"I fear death
The way I fear the end of a song" what an incredible first line! Hits really hard
I love this so much!!! I can feel space and time contracting and expanding and its wonderful! I also love the switch to the second person in the last stanza. My introducing a witness you make your "universe" feel more real.
of course! Music is really fun but it burns people out so quickly lol
Same!! It's so, so pretty
thanks so much!
Ooooh okay, thank you so much! I will definitely be trying these!
Your art is so amazing!!
oooh that's cool!