This is very sweet. A fresh snowfall really does seem to have that magic over us, reminding us we're still kids at heart, when we need to hear that message from the universe most. I love your descriptions of the setting and musings about what the season brings up emotionally.
This is so beautiful!! The descriptions are breathtaking, and I had to read it over twice because of how much I loved it! Also I can't believe you're only 11--this seems like something that could be in an anthology written by adults!! :)
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this piece even though it sort of felt like a confession I wasn't supposed to make. And thanks for noticing the prose style! :D
this hit really close to home, I love it so much
Oh yay!! Thank you!
Woah! That sky is so sky-blue, and the contrast with the flowers and branches is so sharp! This really pops.
This is very sweet. A fresh snowfall really does seem to have that magic over us, reminding us we're still kids at heart, when we need to hear that message from the universe most. I love your descriptions of the setting and musings about what the season brings up emotionally.
the title made me thing of the book a ballad of songbirds and snakes
Oki!
Sorry for the late reply. I'm not the one who wrote the tag but there's a bunch of them all around Austin Texas. Really insperational message though!
This is so beautiful!! The descriptions are breathtaking, and I had to read it over twice because of how much I loved it! Also I can't believe you're only 11--this seems like something that could be in an anthology written by adults!! :)
beautiful & hauntingly true. love the line breaks. <3
Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this piece even though it sort of felt like a confession I wasn't supposed to make. And thanks for noticing the prose style! :D