Oh my heart ached with this one. I know how you feel. I hope you can have someone someday who will put in the effort and make you feel loved. Also loved the use of repetition in this piece. Keep writing <3
Thank you, I appreciate it! My current home I don't believe will ever feel nor has felt like that (a family of 8 + so I understand the loud and very dramatic) I wrote this more on what I desire for it to feel like, or what I hope to provide in my house one day. I do have a close -nit community or more like I'm very involved in community projects(I do lots of community service) and that has felt more like a "home" to me.
Wow, this is a really cool style of poetry! Thank you for sharing this. Beautiful!
This is beautiful. I definitely relate. Super powerful phrasing, and I love the stanzas. Incredible! :)
So real. Awesome job!
Thank you so much!!
Oh my heart ached with this one. I know how you feel. I hope you can have someone someday who will put in the effort and make you feel loved. Also loved the use of repetition in this piece. Keep writing <3
For history, Alan Gratz writes really accurate historical fiction. They're easy to be dragged into!
I love that sketch! And its really cool how you put it with the protests.
Thank you, I appreciate it! My current home I don't believe will ever feel nor has felt like that (a family of 8 + so I understand the loud and very dramatic) I wrote this more on what I desire for it to feel like, or what I hope to provide in my house one day. I do have a close -nit community or more like I'm very involved in community projects(I do lots of community service) and that has felt more like a "home" to me.
Bea no it’s not, hush
Yes, it’s too late