From the times I woke up from being under anesthesia, I would recommend that the person waking up doesn't always know or care too much about exactly what's going on. People kept asking me how I was feeling, and I was insistent on saying, "I just want a popsicle."
It was the same with other people I know. They just kept saying, "I want a hamburger."
Maybe not the serious tone you want, but it would add a layer of humor and relatability.
ooh yes!!!!
West Side Story is really good!
you're very welcome I hope it helps!
k I'll look into the breathing techniques. Thanks!
does make sense for the person to be hungry. Filling up the belly is a priority
Thanks so much. Honestly sometimes I wish I was less in touch with my emotions :/
Thank you! I was experimenting with that a little.
Awww, so sweet! We are lucky to have you.
That is so fun!
From the times I woke up from being under anesthesia, I would recommend that the person waking up doesn't always know or care too much about exactly what's going on. People kept asking me how I was feeling, and I was insistent on saying, "I just want a popsicle."
It was the same with other people I know. They just kept saying, "I want a hamburger."
Maybe not the serious tone you want, but it would add a layer of humor and relatability.
I really like the formatting/line break style you did for this poem!